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Post by deathofastar on Jun 24, 2005 3:45:01 GMT -5
{The Everlasting Unleashment Of A Soul's Gentle Tune}
I find sorrow.
This lake has taken my one true love.
We had
frolicked
and we had
laughed
We thought of the next day; we thought there would be more days.
But it
took
her,
She was rendered
ashes upon the lake of sorrow.
I gaze blankly upon the lake.
It makes me ponder the gentle
lapping upon the shore, makes me want
to be coupled
with her
in time's caress.
I want to visit her blissful corpse; hear her laughing in aquatic splash
A taken love; her corpse still resting somewhere beneath those
rounded
ripples.
I feel the clay beneath my fingers; looking around
at the gazing strangers.
Her heart woven from the threads of fine fabrics.
I cry my tears,
They descend
Splashing down,
rippling the waters,
Creating mirrors from my mind
Her face in time.
Reaching down, I want her again; to this aquatic world her frail
body lost its oxygen, And found no release..
My delicate love joined the deceased..
She left that one warm summer's night,
Not a fear nor a care .
she was encompassed with joy and delight.
If it was only for a moment, a glimmer in time..
Now you know the story;
Tell no one my crime.
Omega Maverick:
www.gothicinferno.com
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Post by PsychoticAntidote on Jul 2, 2005 3:28:22 GMT -5
Nice poem I like it alot. Flows very well. Very well written.
--Psychoticantidote
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Post by The Watcher on Jul 4, 2005 11:44:13 GMT -5
Nice poem I like it alot. Flows very well. Very well written. --Psychoticantidote I agree with Psychoticantidote This is a very nice bit of work...!!...  |
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